June 16th, 2016, 12:00 pm

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Reply Reign of Chaos, June 2nd, 2016, 7:55 am

End of chapter 1 and of me caring enough to update


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Reply Ultimate the Hedgehog, June 16th, 2016, 12:16 pm


Reply Whip the Rabbit, June 16th, 2016, 1:31 pm

I think after a bit of shocking revelation, ice cream would have been a nice reprieve. :c

Reply Dregan, June 17th, 2016, 12:49 pm

Oop, just a small thing, though may advise you to maybe shift some of your speech bubbles more vertical? Primarily looking at Panel 5, where you've loads of space up top, but you're still layering speech over your character's heads.

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